Feedback From opening sequence

FEEDBACK

after screening our sequence to an audience this is the feedback we got:

- suitable lighting
- sets up questions
- good use of lighting
- good use of editing
- good soundtrack works well with content not too sure about fonts of titles.
- nice camera work - good range of shots
- nice mix and match of color for titles
- great atmosphere in the party scenes
- suitable use of soundtracks
- protagonist is noticeable
- clear genre - teenage romantic comedy
- suitable music and title
- conventions : alcohol, smoking, drugs, sex
- good lighting
- genre clear
- protagonists identified early
- clear its a teenage romantic comedy because of the age of characters
- shows main characters at the very beginning
- music fits well
- good soundtrack
- good sound bridge
- good job
- needs Keeley in it
- how were group q1-09 aloud to use pre-made music
- good sound bridge : diegetic and non diegetic sounds
- liked the drugs
- good use of transition blurry edges on screen
- genre clear from teenagers at the start
- protagonists obvious from the start
- good use of diegetic sound
- effective lighting - emphasising on smoke at the beginning
- good music, suits genre
- nice transitions between shots
- follows rules of continuity well
- good stereotypical characters
- establishing genre well (appropriate music)
- identifies several possible protagonists - those with dialogue, main ones? - yes reinforced at the end with second piece of dialogue
- sets up questions for rest of film